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Based on the picture which was a collab between me and the talented *BrushBell. She drew the picture, I coloured it. Go team~

So I wanted to write something sexier than what I normally write. #sorrynotsorry

I might write a more sexier version of this for fanfiction.net, but it depends on how many people are interested. Since it's something I generally don't dive into past this. I can, just not generally.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This certainly is a unique little story of these two. I'm always a fan of seeing the turtles in clothes, and I love how you actually made it romantic. April has always had an interesting relationship with Donatello; in the episodes it usually seemed like she had special attention for him. It's certainly the same with Donnie for her. He ALWAYS has attention for her and most of that attention is used in order to capture hers.
You've really expressed both of their view for each other and how interact with one another if they were in a couple. April loves him regardless of what is, but for who he is. She looks beyond the his surface, or even forgets it's there. It the same with his brothers, as well. As for Donnie, it seems he doesn't realized that she doesn't care what he looks like; he's very hesitant. But, at the same time he wants to be near her and protect her, it was probably her cryptic phone call that had him visit her in the first place. Am I right?

I like how touching you made their relationship. Even with her father free, I think after being isolated from other humans for so long, her already weak ability to socialize grew weaker. I think that's another reason why she accepted the turtles so well. The arrival of Donnie show how comfortable and loved she feels around him; even in her coldest and loneliest moments, he always has a gentle warmth she needs in her heart. (Kind of ironic, since he's cold-blooded.) I'm guessing, after losing her mother, AND having her father taken away from her for so long, she must get lonely easily.

In conclusion, your touching story really explains how these two love one another and benefit each other in a sweet, romantic way.